Bài mẫu IELTS Writing Task 2 – Band 8.0
Dạng đề: Two-part question · 284 từ
Bài mẫu
Mở bài In many parts of the world, traditional costumes are increasingly giving way to jeans, T-shirts and global brands. This essay will explain why this shift is occurring and argue that, although it has some advantages, it is mainly a negative trend.
Thân bài 1 Câu chủ đề There are two main reasons for this change. Giải thích Firstly, international fashion is practical and affordable. Traditional garments are often expensive, time-consuming to make and unsuitable for modern jobs, whereas mass-produced clothing is cheap and comfortable. Secondly, globalisation and the media spread Western styles everywhere. Ví dụ Young people who watch foreign films and follow international celebrities online naturally want to dress like their idols, so they associate traditional clothes with older generations.
Thân bài 2 Câu chủ đề Admittedly, this trend is not without benefits. Giải thích Global fashion gives people greater freedom of choice and allows them to express their individuality. It also creates jobs in the clothing industry of developing countries. Ví dụ For example, a young woman can wear smart casual clothes to the office during the week and still choose traditional dress for weddings or national holidays.
Thân bài 3 Câu chủ đề Nevertheless, I believe the disadvantages outweigh these benefits. Giải thích Traditional dress is a visible symbol of national identity and history, and when it disappears, part of a community's cultural heritage is lost. Moreover, the skills of local tailors and weavers may die out as demand falls. Ví dụ For example, in some regions, handwoven fabrics that were once worn daily are now seen only in museums or at festivals. This would leave future generations with a poorer understanding of their roots.
Kết bài In conclusion, traditional clothing is declining because global fashion is cheaper, more convenient and heavily promoted by the media. Although this offers more choice, it threatens cultural diversity, so traditional dress deserves to be actively preserved.
Từ vựng & cụm từ hay (24)
| traditional costumes | trang phục truyền thống |
| giving way to | nhường chỗ cho |
| mainly a negative trend | chủ yếu là một xu hướng tiêu cực |
| practical and affordable | tiện dụng và giá cả phải chăng |
| time-consuming to make | tốn thời gian để may |
| mass-produced clothing | quần áo sản xuất hàng loạt |
| globalisation and the media | toàn cầu hóa và truyền thông |
| dress like their idols | ăn mặc giống thần tượng |
| associate traditional clothes with | gắn trang phục truyền thống với |
| Admittedly | Phải thừa nhận rằng |
| is not without benefits | không phải không có lợi ích |
| greater freedom of choice | nhiều tự do lựa chọn hơn |
| express their individuality | thể hiện cá tính |
| smart casual clothes | trang phục lịch sự thoải mái |
| national holidays | ngày lễ quốc gia |
| outweigh | lớn hơn |
| a visible symbol of | biểu tượng hữu hình của |
| cultural heritage | di sản văn hóa |
| die out | mai một |
| handwoven fabrics | vải dệt thủ công |
| a poorer understanding of their roots | hiểu biết nghèo nàn hơn về cội nguồn |
| heavily promoted by the media | được truyền thông quảng bá mạnh mẽ |
| threatens cultural diversity | đe dọa sự đa dạng văn hóa |
| actively preserved | được chủ động gìn giữ |
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