IELTS Writing Task 2 – Band 8.0 Sample
Question type: Problem–Solution · 287 words
Model answer
Traffic congestion has become a daily nightmare for residents of many major cities, wasting time and fuel and worsening air quality. This essay will examine the main causes of this problem and suggest several measures to tackle it.
The most obvious cause is the rapid rise in private vehicle ownership. As incomes increase, more families can afford a car, yet road networks in older cities were never designed to cope with such volumes. Furthermore, public transport is often unreliable or overcrowded, so commuters see driving as the only practical option. For instance, in cities such as Hanoi and Jakarta, buses are stuck in the same jams as cars, which gives people little reason to switch to them. In addition, poor urban planning concentrates offices in the city centre, forcing millions of people to travel in the same direction at the same time.
Several measures could ease the situation. First, governments should invest heavily in fast and affordable mass transit, such as metro lines and dedicated bus lanes, so that public transport becomes a genuine alternative to driving. Second, authorities could introduce congestion charges for vehicles entering the city centre during peak hours. London and Singapore have used this approach to reduce traffic volumes significantly while raising funds for public transport.
In the longer term, cities should decentralise economic activity. Building new business districts in the suburbs and encouraging flexible working hours would spread journeys more evenly across the day and across the city. Employers could also allow staff to work from home on certain days.
In conclusion, traffic congestion results mainly from rising car ownership, inadequate public transport and poor planning. A combination of better transit, road pricing and smarter urban design offers the most promising solution.
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- poor urban planning
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- dedicated bus lanes
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- reduce traffic volumes significantly
- In the longer term
- decentralise economic activity
- encouraging flexible working hours
- spread journeys more evenly
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- the most promising solution
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